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Every piece in One Thought, a Mortal Life is a ci—a classical Chinese song lyric written to a fixed tune. This guide starts at the beginning: what a ci is, what a tune pattern is and where it comes from, how to read one and how to write to one, and what place these patterns held in the lives of people long ago. Read it first, and you will find more to savor in the poems.

Ci: Poems Made to Be Sung

Put simply: if a shi, the classical Chinese poem, is something you recite, a ci is something you sing. The form arose in the Sui and Tang dynasties and flourished under the Northern and Southern Song, and it began life as words set to music. With a ci, the tune comes first and the words second: the writer follows the tune’s long and short phrases, its rises and falls, and “fills in” the words one character at a time.

The form has gone by many names, and each catches a different side of it:

  • Quzi ci (words for a tune): the name used in the Tang and Five Dynasties, meaning simply “the lyrics of a song.” Tang and Five Dynasties manuscripts discovered at Dunhuang preserve a great many of these lyrics from ordinary people.
  • Yuefu and yuezhang (songs and musical pieces): because ci could be set to music and sung, they carried on the yuefu song tradition of the Han and Wei, and Song-dynasty poets often called their own collections yuefu or yuezhang—as in Su Shi’s Dongpo yuefu (Dongpo’s Songs) and Liu Yong’s Yuezhang ji (Collected Songs).
  • Changduan ju (long and short lines): the lines of a shi are mostly a regular five or seven characters, while the lines of a ci run long and short in a pleasing irregularity. Qin Guan’s collection bears exactly this name: Huaihai jushi changduan ju (Long and Short Lines of the Recluse of Huaihai).
  • Shiyu (what is left over from poetry): a term that caught on from the Southern Song onward, meaning the ink a poet spends once the business of poetry is done—a name with a touch of modesty in it.
  • Yisheng and tianci (leaning on the tune, filling in the words): these name the method itself—you lean on the sound of the melody and fill the words into it.

Cipai: The Name of a Tune

The tune a ci is written to has a name, and that name is its cipai, or tune pattern; it is also called a cidiao (ci tune) or diaoming (tune title).

Think of a tune pattern as the melody of a pop song: the same melody can carry many different sets of lyrics, and whatever words you give it, it is still the same tune. Or think of it as a sheet of squared writing paper with the grid already drawn: how many sections, how many lines in each, how many characters to a line, which square must rhyme, which takes a level tone and which an oblique one (more on these tones below)—all of it is settled in advance, and the writer has only to set the words down in the squares.

What a tune pattern lays down is mainly this:

  • How many sections: each section of a ci is called a pian, a stanza. A ci of a single stanza is called dandiao; two stanzas is by far the most common, and some have three or four;
  • How many lines in all, how many characters in each line, and where each line pauses;
  • Where the rhymes fall, whether they are level-tone or oblique-tone rhymes, and whether the rhyme changes partway through;
  • Whether each character takes a level or an oblique tone, and which positions allow some leeway.

A single tune pattern often goes by several names—“one tune, many names.” Most of these were coined later from a line in a famous poem: Nian Nu Jiao, for instance, is also called Da Jiang Dong Qu (East Flows the Great River) and Lei Jiang Yue (A Libation to the River Moon), both taken from Su Shi’s celebrated piece to that tune. There are also patterns that share a name but not a melody—“one name, different tunes.” And a tune pattern often exists in several slightly different forms, which the formularies, the reference books that chart each pattern, list as “variant forms.”

The Skeleton of a Ci

  • Pian (stanza): one section of a ci, also called a que, bian or die. A ci of just one stanza is called dandiao, such as Shi Liu Zi Ling or Yi Jiang Nan; two stanzas is the most common, conventionally called shuangdiao; there are also long tunes of three or four stanzas, the longest being Ying Ti Xu, four stanzas and 240 characters in all. At the short end, one form of Zhu Zhi has only two lines of fourteen characters, and Shi Liu Zi Ling has just sixteen.
  • Que: a whole ci can also be counted as “one que,” and its first and second stanzas are likewise called the upper que and the lower que.
  • Xiaoling, zhongdiao, changdiao (short lyrics, medium tunes, long tunes): Ming scholars sorted ci by character count, and the Qing scholar Mao Xianshu drew the lines: up to 58 characters is a xiaoling, 59 to 90 a zhongdiao, and 91 or more a changdiao, also called a manci. This is only a rough division; different forms of the same tune pattern often cross the boundaries.
  • Huantou (changing the head): when the opening lines of the second stanza differ from those of the first, this is called huantou, or guopian (crossing the stanza). It is often where the poem’s thought takes a turn—like a song switching to a different style of singing when it reaches the second verse.
  • Lingzi (leading word): long tunes often use a single character to lead the several lines that follow, like 渐 (jiàn, “gradually”) in Liu Yong’s Ba Sheng Gan Zhou: “Gradually the frosty wind grows keen and cold, the passes and rivers lie desolate, the last light falls upon the tower.” A leading word usually takes the departing tone (the four tones are explained below), which makes it sound strong, like a downbeat in music.
  • Dieju (repeated lines): some tune patterns require a line or a few characters to be repeated, like “Like a dream, like a dream” in Ru Meng Ling, or “Wrong, wrong, wrong!” at the close of Chai Tou Feng.

Ci, Shi and Qu: Differences and Styles

How Ci Differs from Shi

  • Lines: shi lines are mostly a regular five or seven characters; in a ci, line length follows the tune, anywhere from a single character to a dozen or so.
  • Rhyme: regulated verse (lüshi, the strictest form of shi) usually rhymes only on level tones, keeping one rhyme from start to finish; in a ci, the tune pattern decides where the rhymes fall, rhymes can be level or oblique, and the rhyme can change partway through.
  • Structure: a ci is divided into stanzas and has features such as the change at the head of the second stanza, leading words and repeated lines (all explained above), none of which shi have.
  • Voice and feeling: shi can be chanted, while ci were originally sung to music. An old saying holds that shi is dignified and ci alluring: shi tends toward the solemn expression of one’s aims, while ci excels at delicate, elusive stirrings of the heart.

How Ci Differs from Qu

Ci and qu are close relatives—alike in looks, different in temperament:

  • Qu may add chenzi, “padding words,” outside the metrical pattern, which makes them more colloquial and lively to sing; ci generally do not. As the Qing scholar Wan Shu put it, qu have padding words and ci have none.
  • Qu can link several tunes in the same musical mode (gongdiao, explained below) into a suite that tells a story; a ci mostly stands alone as a single piece.
  • Qu rhyme more densely and speak in plainer, more direct language; ci prize restraint and implication.
  • Qu are still sung today in Kunqu and other forms of Chinese opera, and their tunes remain living music; most of the scores of Song ci have been lost, and the tune patterns now survive mainly as metrical forms for words.

The Delicate and the Bold

Zhang Yan of the Ming divided ci broadly into two styles: wanyue, the delicate and restrained, and haofang, the bold and unrestrained. The delicate style is subtle and tender, writing mostly of parting, longing and the sorrows of one’s lot; Liu Yong, Qin Guan and Li Qingzhao are its representative voices. The bold style is broad and expansive, writing mostly of mountains and rivers, meditations on the past and lofty ambitions; Su Shi and Xin Qiji represent it. This is only a rough division, and many poets wrote in both manners.

From Yuefu to Ci to Qu: Every Age Has Its Songs

Chinese poetry has always gone hand in hand with music. One way to see it: yuefu were the popular songs of the Han, Wei and Six Dynasties, ci the popular songs of the Tang and Song, and qu the popular songs of the Yuan and Ming. Every age has its own songs, and its own way of writing words to them.

  • Pre-Qin: the three hundred and more pieces of the Shijing (Classic of Poetry) could all originally be sung.
  • Han: Emperor Wu established the Yuefu, or Music Bureau, a government office that gathered songs from every region and set them to music for performance; their lyrics are known as yuefu poems. Later, poetry and song gradually went their separate ways: what could be sung was called yuefu, and what was meant only for reciting was called shi.
  • Sui and Tang: music from the Western Regions mingled with the older music of the Central Plains to form yanyue, banquet music (the yan is sometimes written with a different character of the same sound), and new tunes poured forth. Court musicians and men of letters wrote words to the rhythms of these new tunes, the lines running long or short as the melody did—and so the ci was born. Emperor Xuanzong of Tang (r. 712–756) set up the Jiaofang, an office in charge of popular music at court; of the more than three hundred tune names that Cui Lingqin recorded in his Jiaofang ji (Records of the Court Music Office), many later became tune patterns, such as Pu Sa Man, Xi Jiang Yue and Ding Feng Bo.
  • Late Tang and Five Dynasties: Wen Tingyun wrote ci in great numbers. In the Later Shu, Zhao Chongzuo compiled the Huajian ji (Among the Flowers, 940), five hundred ci by eighteen poets—the earliest surviving anthology of ci by literati. Li Yu of the Southern Tang poured the grief of a lost kingdom into his ci, and with him the form’s horizons opened wide.
  • Northern Song: Liu Yong wrote mostly long, slow pieces known as manci (“slow lyrics”), which were sung everywhere; Su Shi brought the spirit of shi into ci and wrote with the sweep of “East flows the great river”; Zhou Bangyan was a master of music. Under Emperor Huizong the court established the Dasheng Bureau to put the tunes in order, the number of ci tunes grew to more than two hundred, and the form reached its height.
  • Southern Song: Xin Qiji wrote his devotion to his country into his ci; Jiang Kui composed his own music and left seventeen ci with their musical notation, precious material today for studying the music of Song ci. By the late Southern Song, the scores of ci were gradually being lost.
  • Yuan and Ming: new music arose in the north, and sanqu (art songs) and zaju (variety plays) took over the role of the sung word. The tunes they followed are called qupai, and many qupai names came straight from ci tune patterns.
  • Qing: the ci enjoyed a revival. Wan Shu compiled the Cilü (Ci Prosody); Wang Yiqing and others, by order of the Kangxi Emperor, compiled the Qinding cipu (Imperial Formulary of Ci Patterns), with 826 tunes in 2,306 forms; and Ge Zai compiled the Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci). The rules of ci writing were set down in books that are still in use today.

Where Tune Patterns Came From

The four hundred or so common tune patterns came, broadly speaking, from these sources:

  • Music of the court and the Jiaofang: many tune patterns began as Tang Jiaofang tunes. Take Pu Sa Man (Bodhisattva Barbarians): legend has it that when envoys from the kingdom of Nüman came to the court of Emperor Xuanzong of Tang (r. 846–859), they wore their hair piled high, with golden crowns and strings of jewels hung all over them, and people called them the “bodhisattva barbarian troupe”; the court musicians wrote a new tune inspired by them.
  • Folk songs: Zhu Zhi (Bamboo Branch) was originally a folk song of the Ba–Yu region, around today’s Chongqing; this book’s Ai Nai Qu (Song of the Oars) was written by the Tang poet Yuan Jie during his posting in Daozhou, modeled on the songs boatmen sang as they rowed.
  • Famous lines: a line from the earliest poem written to a tune became the tune’s name. Yi Jian Mei (A Spray of Plum) comes from Zhou Bangyan’s line about a single cut spray of plum blossom, lovely in ten thousand ways; this book’s Qiu Ye Yue (Autumn Night Moon) comes from phrases in a ci by Yin E of the Five Dynasties—“the fine festival of late autumn” and “deep in the night, a few slanting beams of moonlight pierce the window.”
  • People, stories and places: Nian Nu Jiao takes its name from Niannu, a celebrated Tang singer; Gan Zhou, Yi Zhou and Liang Zhou were originally daqu—the long, many-movement suites of court music—named after prefectures on the northwestern frontier.
  • Tunes poets composed themselves: poets well versed in music wrote their own melodies and named them, as Jiang Kui did with Yang Zhou Man (Slow Song of Yangzhou), An Xiang (Hidden Fragrance), Shu Ying (Sparse Shadows) and Qi Liang Fan (Desolate Modulation).
  • Old names, new music: an old title from Six Dynasties yuefu or an earlier age was kept and a new melody composed for it; Wu Ye Ti (Crows Cry at Night), for example, was originally an old yuefu title of the Southern Dynasties.
  • Sections cut from grand suites: the daqu of the Tang and Song were very long, and a single section could be lifted out to become a tune of its own—Shui Diao Ge Tou, for example, takes the opening of the suite Shui Diao (Water Melody).
  • Variations on an existing tune: adding characters, dropping characters, or changing the tempo or the mode produced new tunes, and the tune title often carries a marker of this—see the next section.

Telltale Words in Tune Titles

First, a term that comes up often: gongdiao, the musical mode. It was the system of modes in old Chinese music, rather like saying C major or A minor today; the mode a tune belonged to determined its pitch and its color.

Tune titles often end in a word that works like a model number, telling you the tune’s length, its rhythm, or what it was varied from:

WordMeaningExamples
令 (lìng)A short tune. At Tang banquets, each song sung went with a round of wine, and one song made one ling.Ru Meng Ling, Shi Liu Zi Ling
引 (yǐn)An existing short tune drawn out into a longer, new melody.Qian Qiu Sui Yin
近 (jìn)Short for jinpai; in length it falls between a ling and a man.Zhu Ying Tai Jin, Guo Lang Er Jin Pai
慢 (màn)A long tune with a slow, unhurried tempo and longer lines.Sheng Sheng Man, Yang Zhou Man, Tan Chun Man
犯 (fàn)The tune shifts into another mode partway through, or phrases from several tunes are joined together.Qi Liang Fan, Si Fan Jian Mei Hua
摊破 (tān pò)Characters added to the original tune, stretching a phrase or changing the shape of a line.Tan Po Huan Xi Sha
减字 (jiǎn zì), 偷声 (tōu shēng)Characters taken away and syllables dropped.Jian Zi Mu Lan Hua, Tou Sheng Mu Lan Hua
促拍 (cù pāi)A quickened tempo.Cu Pai Cai Sang Zi
转调 (zhuǎn diào)The whole tune moved into another mode to be sung.Zhuan Diao Er Lang Shen
歌头 (gē tóu), 摘遍 (zhāi biàn)A section taken from a grand suite: getou takes the opening, zhaibian lifts out one movement from within.Shui Diao Ge Tou, Liu Zhou Ge Tou, Bo Mei Zhai Bian

A few characters in tune titles are easy to misread. 乐, meaning a piece of music, is read yuè, as in Qing Bei Yue and Sheng Ping Yue; 更 in Geng Lou Zi refers to the watches of the night and is read gēng; 调 in Shui Diao Ge Tou means a tune and is read diào; and 幺 in Liu Yao Ling is read yāo.

Title and Content: From Writing to the Tune’s Name to Borrowing Its Mood

The link between a tune’s name and what a ci is about can be close or loose, and it changed over time.

At first, the tune title was the subject. Ci of the Tang and Five Dynasties were mostly written about whatever the tune’s name said. As Huang Sheng of the Southern Song observed in his Hua’an cixuan (Hua’an’s Anthology of Ci), Tang ci were mostly composed on their titles: a Lin Jiang Xian (Immortal by the River) spoke of immortals, a Nü Guan Zi (The Daoist Priestess) told of the Daoist life, and a He Du Shen (Spirit of the River) sang of shrines and temples. A ci written to the original meaning of its tune title was said to follow its “original sense” (benyi). Think of “Happy Birthday”: a song made to be sung on birthdays.

Later, title and content gradually drifted apart. When a lovely tune spread far and wide, people borrowed it to write about other things on their minds; as Huang Sheng goes on to say, things slowly changed, until the poems wandered far from their titles. It is like a moving melody that many people write new words to, until what is sung is no longer what the song was first about. So that readers would know what a given piece was about, Song poets began adding a title or a short preface after the tune name. Before his Shui Diao Ge Tou, for instance, Su Shi wrote: “Mid-Autumn of the bingchen year (1076). I drank happily until dawn, got thoroughly drunk, and wrote this piece, thinking also of Ziyou”—his younger brother.

Drifting apart did not mean losing touch. A tune carries feeling of its own, and a poet who knew the craft matched tune to feeling, just as no one would pair a wedding invitation with a funeral dirge: bold, stirring or tragic feeling went naturally to Man Jiang Hong or Liu Zhou Ge Tou, lingering sorrow at parting to Yi Jian Mei or Yu Lin Ling. Many poets also made a point of letting the tune title and the poem echo each other, so that the title set the poem’s undertone before a word of it was read.

This book is written the same way. The tune title and the poem often mirror each other, and after the “·” comes a title that pins down which moment, which event, the piece is about. Take Qiu Ye Yue · Before First Light: “Qiu Ye Yue” (Autumn Night Moon) spreads out the autumn night and its moonlight, while “Before First Light” brings the lens to rest on the moment when the sky is about to brighten but has not yet. Think of the tune title as the name of a song, and the title after it as the name of this particular performance.

What Tune Patterns Meant in Old China

  • For singing: at banquets, farewells, seasonal festivals and birthday celebrations, singers were called on to perform ci to their tunes. The Song writer Ye Mengde recorded that Liu Yong’s ci had spread so widely that wherever there was a well to drink from, people could sing Liu Yong—like a pop song today that you hear wherever you go.
  • For friendship: because a tune pattern’s form is fixed, friends could trade poems back and forth on the same tune and the same rhymes, and later poets could answer those who came centuries before them. Xin Qiji and Chen Liang exchanged poems in just this way to the tune He Xin Lang.
  • For setting the mood: every tune has its own voice and feeling, so choosing a tune pattern also set the emotional undertone of a poem.
  • As a set of rules: once the music was lost, tune patterns became metrical forms for words; generation after generation wrote to them, and so the ci has lived on to this day.
  • As keepers of history: the tune names themselves are like a small museum, holding a Tang court dance troupe (Pu Sa Man), a famous singer (Nian Nu Jiao), the northwestern frontier (Gan Zhou, Yi Zhou), folk songs (Zhu Zhi) and tales of men of letters. To read a tune title is also to read a piece of the past.
  • Opening the way for what followed: the sanqu and zaju of the Yuan and Ming, and later Kunqu opera, were all sung to qupai, a system inherited directly from ci tune patterns.

Level and Oblique: The Four Tones

Classical Chinese had four tones: ping (level), shang (rising), qu (departing) and ru (entering). The level tone formed a class of its own, called ping; the rising, departing and entering tones together formed the other class, called ze, the oblique tones. Think of a level tone as a note held long in singing, steady and open, and of the oblique tones as shorter and more clipped, with a rise or a fall. It is the interplay of level and oblique that gives a line its rise and fall.

In Standard Mandarin, roughly speaking, the first and second tones count as level and the third and fourth as oblique. Watch out, though, for characters that once had the entering tone, such as 一 (yī), 白 (bái), 竹 (zhú), 国 (guó) and 学 (xué): in Mandarin they are now pronounced with level tones, but by the old pronunciation they count as oblique. Writing to the old rhymes, based on historical pronunciation, you must check them one by one; writing to the new rhymes, Mandarin pronunciation is the standard.

Ci are more exacting about tone than regulated verse. Regulated verse mostly just tells level from oblique; a ci, at certain key positions, also distinguishes the rising tone from the departing tone. Poets in the line of Zhou Bangyan, Jiang Kui and Wu Wenying were especially particular about this, because those characters had to fit the rise and fall of the melody.

Rhyme

To rhyme is to place characters with the same or similar finals—the vowel and any ending sound of a syllable—at set positions, so that they answer one another, like the note a song keeps coming back to.

  • The tune pattern sets the rhyme positions: some rhyme on every line, some only every few lines.
  • Level and oblique rhymes: some tune patterns rhyme on level tones, like Shi Liu Zi Ling and Huan Xi Sha; some on oblique tones, like Man Jiang Hong and Yu Lin Ling; and some alternate between the two, like Ding Feng Bo and Qing Ping Yue, both used in this book.
  • Entering-tone rhymes: some tune patterns customarily rhyme on entering-tone characters—Man Jiang Hong, Nian Nu Jiao and Yu Lin Ling among them—which sound short and forceful. Mandarin no longer has an entering tone, so when you write to such a tune using the new rhymes, you choose your rhymes by today’s pronunciation.
  • Changing rhyme: a ci can switch partway through from one rhyme group to another, and the formularies mark this specially.
  • Within a single ci, try not to use the same rhyme character twice.

Which rhyme book to follow: Song poets had no official rhymes for ci; they broadly followed the speech of their day, which allowed more freedom than the rules for shi. In the Qing, Ge Zai compiled the Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci), sorting the rhymes of ci into nineteen groups, and it became the rhyme book later writers relied on most. Many writers today also use new rhymes: the Zhonghua xinyun (New Chinese Rhymes, fourteen groups), based on Standard Mandarin, or the shisan zhe (Thirteen Rhyme Tracks) shared by Chinese opera and the folk performing arts.

This book rhymes by the Thirteen Tracks of the new rhymes. Each track gathers characters whose finals are close enough to rhyme with one another—like putting all the words that rhyme together into the same drawer:

TrackFinalsExample
一七 (yī qī)i、ü、er西
姑苏 (gū sū)u出
发花 (fā huā)a、ia、ua佳
梭波 (suō bō)o、e、uo坐
乜斜 (miē xié)ie、üe捏
怀来 (huái lái)ai、uai来
灰堆 (huī duī)ei、ui北
遥条 (yáo tiáo)ao、iao俏
由求 (yóu qiú)ou、iu扭
言前 (yán qián)an、ian、uan、üan南
人辰 (rén chén)en、in、un、ün人
江阳 (jiāng yáng)ang、iang、uang房
中东 (zhōng dōng)eng、ing、ong、iong东

How to Read a Pattern Chart

A formulary (cipu) gives each tune pattern as a kind of grid, marking the tone every character should take and where the rhymes fall. Formularies differ somewhat in their symbols; below we use the set found in Cipai shili (Tune Patterns Explained with Examples):

平
Level tone (píng): this character takes a level tone
仄
Oblique tone (zè): this character takes an oblique tone
平
Circled: should take a level tone, but an oblique tone is allowed
仄
Circled: should take an oblique tone, but a level tone is allowed
○
Placed beneath a character: a rhyme falls here, on a level tone
△
Placed beneath a character: a rhyme falls here, on an oblique tone
●
When the whole ci rhymes on level tones: from here, switch to a new group of level-tone rhymes
▲
When the whole ci rhymes on oblique tones: from here, switch to a new group of oblique-tone rhymes

Other formularies often use other conventions: some mark “either tone” with ⊙ or 中 (zhōng, “middle”); some mark rhymes and changes of rhyme with characters such as 韵 (yùn, “rhyme”), 叶 (xié, “in rhyme”) and 换 (huàn, “change”), and mark the pause at the end of a line and within it with 句 (jù) and 读 (dòu).

The punctuation in a chart shows the pauses: a comma or a full stop is where you pause, and the rhyme mark sits beneath the rhyming character. Below are three tune patterns as Cipai shili sets them out, from simple to complex.

Example One · Shi Liu Zi Ling (Sixteen-Character Song): The Basics

Four lines and sixteen characters in all, with level-tone rhymes on the first, second and fourth lines:

平。

平仄平平仄仄平。

平平仄,

仄仄仄平平。

天!

休教圆蟾照客眠。

人何在?

桂影自婵娟。

Cai Shen (Song dynasty)

Read the two side by side. The first line is a single character, which must take a level tone and must rhyme. The second line has seven characters, of which the first and fifth allow leeway. The third line, level-level-oblique, does not rhyme. In the fourth line the first character allows leeway, and the last one rhymes. Cai Shen’s 天, 眠 and 娟 fall exactly on the three rhyme positions.

Example Two · Pu Sa Man: Level and Oblique Rhymes in Turn

Two stanzas of four lines each, forty-four characters in all. In each stanza the first two lines rhyme on oblique tones and the last two on level tones:

平平仄仄平平仄,

平平仄仄平平仄。

仄仄仄平平,

仄平平仄平。

仄平平仄仄,

仄仄平平仄。

平仄仄平平,

平平平仄平。

平林漠漠烟如织,

寒山一带伤心碧。

暝色入高楼,

有人楼上愁。

玉阶空伫立,

宿鸟归飞急。

何处是归程?

长亭连短亭。

Attributed to Li Bai (Tang dynasty)

This tune moves through four rhymes: the first stanza opens on the oblique rhymes 织 and 碧, then shifts to the level rhymes 楼 and 愁; the second stanza takes up a new pair of oblique rhymes, 立 and 急, then a new pair of level ones, 程 and 亭. Because oblique and level rhymes alternate, every change of rhyme is plain to see, so Cipai shili needs only △ and ○, with no call for ● or ▲.

Example Three · Sao Di Wu: Oblique Throughout, with a Change of Group

Two stanzas of seven lines each, fifty-eight characters in all. Every line rhymes, all on oblique tones; in each stanza the second line repeats the rhyme character of the first; and the second stanza moves to a new group of rhymes:

平仄仄,仄仄仄,

仄平仄平平仄仄。

平仄仄,平仄仄。

仄仄平平平仄仄,仄平仄。

仄仄仄,仄仄仄,

仄平仄平仄仄仄。

平仄仄,仄仄仄。

仄仄平平平仄仄,仄平仄。

酥点萼,玉碾萼,

点时碾时香雪薄。

才折得,春力弱。

半掩朱扉垂绣幕,怕吹落。

捻一晌,嗅一晌,

捻时嗅时宿酒忘。

春笋上,不忍放。

待对菱花斜插向,宝钗上。

Anonymous

The first stanza rhymes on one group of oblique rhymes—萼, 薄, 得, 弱, 幕, 落—marked with △. The second stanza changes to another group—晌, 忘, 上, 放, 向—still oblique, so the tones alone will not tell you the rhyme has changed; Cipai shili therefore switches to ▲ as a reminder. By the same logic, when a ci rhymes on level tones throughout and changes group partway, ● is used. One Thought, a Mortal Life also includes a poem to Sao Di Wu.

How to Look Up a Tune Pattern in Cipai shili

  • Find it: the book is arranged by character count, from fewest to most, with a stroke-count index at the back, so you can find the page by the number of strokes in the tune title. The list of 422 tune patterns at the end of this page follows the book’s order as well.
  • Read it: each entry gives, in order, the tune’s other names, its origin, a description of its form (how many stanzas, how many lines, how many characters, which lines rhyme, and whether on level or oblique tones) and the chart, followed by an example poem—usually the earliest one—with the author named in parentheses at the end.
  • Use it: read the description first, to get the outline in mind; then go through the chart, matching the tone and rhyme marks character by character; finally, set it against the example poem and see which character each mark falls on.
  • Go further: a tune pattern often has several forms, and the book generally gives just one. To see the others, turn to the Qinding cipu and the Cilü.

How to Write a Ci

Writing a ci is like singing from a score: the score is fixed, but the feeling you sing into it is your own. Roughly, you can take it step by step:

  1. Decide what to write about: the matter you want to set down and the mood you want to carry.
  2. Choose a tune: pick a tune pattern whose voice suits the feeling, or one whose title echoes your theme. Beginners do well to start with short lyrics (xiaoling) such as Shi Liu Zi Ling, Yi Jiang Nan, Ru Meng Ling, Chang Xiang Si, Huan Xi Sha and Zhe Gu Tian.
  3. Find the pattern: look the tune up in a formulary such as the Qinding cipu, the Cilü or Cipai shili, choose one of its forms, and copy out the pattern.
  4. Read model poems: first read a few famous pieces written to the tune, to get a feel for its phrasing, its pauses and the turn at the head of the second stanza.
  5. Settle the rhyme: choose a rhyme group (this book uses the Thirteen Tracks) and list the rhyme characters you can use before you start.
  6. Fill in the words by the pattern: check level and oblique tones line by line, taking leeway where either tone is allowed; use departing-tone characters for leading words where you can; and keep the pauses within each line in step with the pattern.
  7. Look it over: count the characters, check the tones, check the rhymes and any change of rhyme, and make sure no rhyme character is used twice.
  8. Read it aloud: ci were made to be sung, and only when a poem flows easily off the tongue, with a rise and fall, has it truly found its tune.

Further Reading

To go deeper, you might read: the Qinding cipu (Imperial Formulary of Ci Patterns); Wan Shu, Cilü (Ci Prosody); Ge Zai, Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci); Yan Jianwen, Cipai shili (Tune Patterns Explained with Examples); Long Yusheng, Tang Song ci gelü (Metrical Patterns of Tang and Song Ci); Wang Li, Shici gelü (Metrical Patterns of Shi and Ci); and Shi Zhecun, Cixue mingci shiyi (Terms of Ci Studies Explained).

Four Hundred and Twenty-Two Tune Patterns

Below are the 422 tune patterns collected in Cipai shili, compiled by Yan Jianwen, arranged by character count from fewest to most—from short lyrics of a dozen or so characters all the way to the 240-character Ying Ti Xu. Those highlighted in color are used in this book; select one to read that poem.

  1. 竹枝词Zhu Zhi Ci
  2. 十六字令Shi Liu Zi Ling
  3. 闲中好Xian Zhong Hao
  4. 纥那曲He Na Qu
  5. 梧桐影Wu Tong Ying
  6. 拜新月Bai Xin Yue
  7. 罗唝曲Luo Hong Qu
  8. 醉妆词Zui Zhuang Ci
  9. 南歌子Nan Ge Zi
  10. 回波乐Hui Bo Yue
  11. 三台令San Tai Ling
  12. 舞马词Wu Ma Ci
  13. 晴偏好Qing Pian Hao
  14. 一点春Yi Dian Chun
  15. 塞姑Sai Gu
  16. 柘枝引Zhe Zhi Yin
  17. 花非花Hua Fei Hua
  18. 摘得新Zhai De Xin
  19. 渔歌子Yu Ge Zi
  20. 章台柳Zhang Tai Liu
  21. 潇湘神Xiao Xiang Shen
  22. 忆江南Yi Jiang Nan
  23. 赤枣子Chi Zao Zi
  24. 解红Jie Hong
  25. 捣练子Dao Lian Zi
  26. 桂殿秋Gui Dian Qiu
  27. 欸乃曲Ai Nai Qu
  28. 杨柳枝Yang Liu Zhi
  29. 金缕曲Jin Lü Qu
  30. 八拍蛮Ba Pai Man
  31. 春莺啭Chun Ying Zhuan
  32. 十样花Shi Yang Hua
  33. 小秦王Xiao Qin Wang
  34. 字字双Zi Zi Shuang
  35. 水调歌Shui Diao Ge
  36. 阿那曲E Nuo Qu
  37. 甘州曲Gan Zhou Qu
  38. 醉吟商Zui Yin Shang
  39. 干荷叶Gan He Ye
  40. 抛球乐Pao Qiu Yue
  41. 踏歌词Ta Ge Ci
  42. 江南春Jiang Nan Chun
  43. 法驾导引Fa Jia Dao Yin
  44. 蕃女怨Fan Nü Yuan
  45. 一叶落Yi Ye Luo
  46. 忆王孙Yi Wang Sun
  47. 金字经Jin Zi Jing
  48. 遐方怨Xia Fang Yuan
  49. 调笑令Tiao Xiao Ling
  50. 诉衷情Su Zhong Qing
  51. 如梦令Ru Meng Ling
  52. 西溪子Xi Xi Zi
  53. 天仙子Tian Xian Zi
  54. 定西番Ding Xi Fan
  55. 长相思Chang Xiang Si
  56. 思帝乡Si Di Xiang
  57. 何满子He Man Zi
  58. 风光好Feng Guang Hao
  59. 相见欢Xiang Jian Huan
  60. 误桃源Wu Tao Yuan
  61. 上行杯Shang Xing Bei
  62. 望梅花Wang Mei Hua
  63. 醉太平Zui Tai Ping
  64. 感恩多Gan En Duo
  65. 长命女Chang Ming Nü
  66. 怨回纥Yuan Hui He
  67. 酒泉子Jiu Quan Zi
  68. 生查子Sheng Zha Zi
  69. 醉公子Zui Gong Zi
  70. 蝴蝶儿Hu Die Er
  71. 春光好Chun Guang Hao
  72. 昭君怨Zhao Jun Yuan
  73. 女冠子Nü Guan Zi
  74. 纱窗恨Sha Chuang Hen
  75. 醉花间Zui Hua Jian
  76. 点绛唇Dian Jiang Chun
  77. 归国遥Gui Guo Yao
  78. 浣溪沙Huan Xi Sha
  79. 恋情深Lian Qing Shen
  80. 沙塞子Sha Sai Zi
  81. 水仙子Shui Xian Zi
  82. 清商怨Qing Shang Yuan
  83. 伤春怨Shang Chun Yuan
  84. 霜天晓角Shuang Tian Xiao Jiao
  85. 菩萨蛮Pu Sa Man
  86. 采桑子Cai Sang Zi
  87. 后庭花Hou Ting Hua
  88. 卜算子Bu Suan Zi
  89. 好时光Hao Shi Guang
  90. 谒金门Ye Jin Men
  91. 柳含烟Liu Han Yan
  92. 华清引Hua Qing Yin
  93. 天门谣Tian Men Yao
  94. 散余霞San Yu Xia
  95. 好事近Hao Shi Jin
  96. 清平乐Qing Ping Yue
  97. 忆秦娥Yi Qin E
  98. 更漏子Geng Lou Zi
  99. 巫山一段云Wu Shan Yi Duan Yun
  100. 望仙门Wang Xian Men
  101. 占春芳Zhan Chun Fang
  102. 朝天子Chao Tian Zi
  103. 落梅风Luo Mei Feng
  104. 江亭怨Jiang Ting Yuan
  105. 眉峰碧Mei Feng Bi
  106. 阮郎归Ruan Lang Gui
  107. 乌夜啼Wu Ye Ti
  108. 贺圣朝He Sheng Chao
  109. 喜迁莺Xi Qian Ying
  110. 珠帘卷Zhu Lian Juan
  111. 画堂春Hua Tang Chun
  112. 喜长新Xi Chang Xin
  113. 金盏子令Jin Zhan Zi Ling
  114. 谪仙怨Zhe Xian Yuan
  115. 三字令San Zi Ling
  116. 摊破浣溪沙Tan Po Huan Xi Sha
  117. 忆余杭Yi Yu Hang
  118. 撼庭秋Han Ting Qiu
  119. 洞天春Dong Tian Chun
  120. 人月圆Ren Yue Yuan
  121. 庆春时Qing Chun Shi
  122. 海棠春Hai Tang Chun
  123. 眼儿媚Yan Er Mei
  124. 双鸂鶒Shuang Xi Chi
  125. 伊州三台Yi Zhou San Tai
  126. 双头莲令Shuang Tou Lian Ling
  127. 梅弄影Mei Nong Ying
  128. 桃源忆故人Tao Yuan Yi Gu Ren
  129. 朝中措Chao Zhong Cuo
  130. 武陵春Wu Ling Chun
  131. 河渎神He Du Shen
  132. 双韵子Shuang Yun Zi
  133. 归去来Gui Qu Lai
  134. 醉乡春Zui Xiang Chun
  135. 极相思Ji Xiang Si
  136. 柳梢青Liu Shao Qing
  137. 荷叶杯He Ye Bei
  138. 满宫花Man Gong Hua
  139. 少年游Shao Nian You
  140. 滴滴金Di Di Jin
  141. 忆汉月Yi Han Yue
  142. 西江月Xi Jiang Yue
  143. 烛影摇红Zhu Ying Yao Hong
  144. 梁州令Liang Zhou Ling
  145. 盐角儿Yan Jiao Er
  146. 怨三三Yuan San San
  147. 四犯令Si Fan Ling
  148. 桂华明Gui Hua Ming
  149. 促拍采桑子Cu Pai Cai Sang Zi
  150. 折丹桂Zhe Dan Gui
  151. 城头月Cheng Tou Yue
  152. 花前饮Hua Qian Yin
  153. 破字令Po Zi Ling
  154. 导引Dao Yin
  155. 惜分飞Xi Fen Fei
  156. 思越人Si Yue Ren
  157. 探春令Tan Chun Ling
  158. 越江吟Yue Jiang Yin
  159. 燕归梁Yan Gui Liang
  160. 秋夜雨Qiu Ye Yu
  161. 伊州令Yi Zhou Ling
  162. 木笪Mu Da
  163. 醉红妆Zui Hong Zhuang
  164. 思远人Si Yuan Ren
  165. 望江东Wang Jiang Dong
  166. 倾杯令Qing Bei Ling
  167. 入塞Ru Sai
  168. 醉花阴Zui Hua Yin
  169. 浪淘沙Lang Tao Sha
  170. 金错刀Jin Cuo Dao
  171. 卖花声Mai Hua Sheng
  172. 天下乐Tian Xia Yue
  173. 江月晃重山Jiang Yue Huang Chong Shan
  174. 安阳好An Yang Hao
  175. 撷芳词Xie Fang Ci
  176. 鬓边华Bin Bian Hua
  177. 鹦鹉曲Ying Wu Qu
  178. 南乡一剪梅Nan Xiang Yi Jian Mei
  179. 一七令Yi Qi Ling
  180. 河传He Chuan
  181. 木兰花Mu Lan Hua
  182. 金莲绕凤楼Jin Lian Rao Feng Lou
  183. 夜行船Ye Xing Chuan
  184. 鹧鸪天Zhe Gu Tian
  185. 虞美人Yu Mei Ren
  186. 玉楼春Yu Lou Chun
  187. 瑞鹧鸪Rui Zhe Gu
  188. 市桥柳Shi Qiao Liu
  189. 翻香令Fan Xiang Ling
  190. 遍地锦Bian Di Jin
  191. 清江曲Qing Jiang Qu
  192. 楼上曲Lou Shang Qu
  193. 鹊桥仙Que Qiao Xian
  194. 南乡子Nan Xiang Zi
  195. 家山好Jia Shan Hao
  196. 夜游宫Ye You Gong
  197. 一斛珠Yi Hu Zhu
  198. 临江仙Lin Jiang Xian
  199. 踏莎行Ta Suo Xing
  200. 倚西楼Yi Xi Lou
  201. 扫地舞Sao Di Wu
  202. 小重山Xiao Chong Shan
  203. 蝶恋花Die Lian Hua
  204. 寿山曲Shou Shan Qu
  205. 荷华媚He Hua Mei
  206. 黄金缕Huang Jin Lü
  207. 一剪梅Yi Jian Mei
  208. 寻梅Xun Mei
  209. 锦帐春Jin Zhang Chun
  210. 钗头凤Chai Tou Feng
  211. 南楼令Nan Lou Ling
  212. 后庭宴Hou Ting Yan
  213. 定风波Ding Feng Bo
  214. 渔家傲Yu Jia Ao
  215. 破阵子Po Zhen Zi
  216. 苏幕遮Su Mu Zhe
  217. 金蕉叶Jin Jiao Ye
  218. 明月逐人来Ming Yue Zhu Ren Lai
  219. 甘州遍Gan Zhou Bian
  220. 别怨Bie Yuan
  221. 怜薄命Lian Bo Ming
  222. 麦秀两歧Mai Xiu Liang Qi
  223. 酷相思Ku Xiang Si
  224. 解佩令Jie Pei Ling
  225. 谢池春Xie Chi Chun
  226. 玉梅令Yu Mei Ling
  227. 行香子Xing Xiang Zi
  228. 感皇恩Gan Huang En
  229. 青玉案Qing Yu An
  230. 钿带长中腔Dian Dai Chang Zhong Qiang
  231. 三奠子San Dian Zi
  232. 看花回Kan Hua Hui
  233. 拾翠羽Shi Cui Yu
  234. 连理枝Lian Li Zhi
  235. 江城子Jiang Cheng Zi
  236. 小镇西犯Xiao Zhen Xi Fan
  237. 三登乐San Deng Yue
  238. 卓牌子近Zhuo Pai Zi Jin
  239. 檐前铁Yan Qian Tie
  240. 千秋岁Qian Qiu Sui
  241. 粉蝶儿Fen Die Er
  242. 师师令Shi Shi Ling
  243. 郭郎儿近拍Guo Lang Er Jin Pai
  244. 隔浦莲近拍Ge Pu Lian Jin Pai
  245. 百媚娘Bai Mei Niang
  246. 风入松Feng Ru Song
  247. 传言玉女Chuan Yan Yu Nü
  248. 越溪春Yue Xi Chun
  249. 下水船Xia Shui Chuan
  250. 扑蝴蝶Pu Hu Die
  251. 荔枝香Li Zhi Xiang
  252. 婆罗门引Po Luo Men Yin
  253. 韵令Yun Ling
  254. 春声碎Chun Sheng Sui
  255. 御街行Yu Jie Xing
  256. 离亭宴Li Ting Yan
  257. 侧犯Ce Fan
  258. 祝英台近Zhu Ying Tai Jin
  259. 阳关引Yang Guan Yin
  260. 一丛花Yi Cong Hua
  261. 安公子An Gong Zi
  262. 金人捧露盘Jin Ren Peng Lu Pan
  263. 拂霓裳Fu Ni Chang
  264. 柳腰轻Liu Yao Qing
  265. 南州春色Nan Zhou Chun Se
  266. 蓦山溪Mo Shan Xi
  267. 洞仙歌Dong Xian Ge
  268. 秋夜月Qiu Ye Yue
  269. 踏青游Ta Qing You
  270. 华胥引Hua Xu Yin
  271. 江城梅花引Jiang Cheng Mei Hua Yin
  272. 劝金船Quan Jin Chuan
  273. 醉思仙Zui Si Xian
  274. 惜红衣Xi Hong Yi
  275. 石湖仙Shi Hu Xian
  276. 鱼游春水Yu You Chun Shui
  277. 醉翁操Zui Weng Cao
  278. 塞翁吟Sai Weng Yin
  279. 法曲献仙音Fa Qu Xian Xian Yin
  280. 露华Lu Hua
  281. 薄媚摘遍Bo Mei Zhai Bian
  282. 东风齐着力Dong Feng Qi Zhuo Li
  283. 满江红Man Jiang Hong
  284. 四犯剪梅花Si Fan Jian Mei Hua
  285. 凄凉犯Qi Liang Fan
  286. 高平探芳新Gao Ping Tan Fang Xin
  287. 六幺令Liu Yao Ling
  288. 芙蓉月Fu Rong Yue
  289. 玉漏迟Yu Lou Chi
  290. 水调歌头Shui Diao Ge Tou
  291. 满庭芳Man Ting Fang
  292. 扫地游Sao Di You
  293. 白雪Bai Xue
  294. 二色莲Er Se Lian
  295. 双瑞莲Shuang Rui Lian
  296. 徵招Zhi Shao
  297. 凤凰台上忆吹箫Feng Huang Tai Shang Yi Chui Xiao
  298. 骤雨打新荷Zhou Yu Da Xin He
  299. 黄莺儿Huang Ying Er
  300. 熙州慢Xi Zhou Man
  301. 天香Tian Xiang
  302. 汉宫春Han Gong Chun
  303. 剑器近Jian Qi Jin
  304. 早梅香Zao Mei Xiang
  305. 八声甘州Ba Sheng Gan Zhou
  306. 醉蓬莱Zui Peng Lai
  307. 夜合花Ye He Hua
  308. 夏初临Xia Chu Lin
  309. 长亭怨慢Chang Ting Yuan Man
  310. 暗香An Xiang
  311. 被花恼Bei Hua Nao
  312. 松梢月Song Shao Yue
  313. 梦芙蓉Meng Fu Rong
  314. 玉京谣Yu Jing Yao
  315. 绿盖舞风轻Lü Gai Wu Feng Qing
  316. 采明珠Cai Ming Zhu
  317. 声声慢Sheng Sheng Man
  318. 燕春台Yan Chun Tai
  319. 黄河清慢Huang He Qing Man
  320. 并蒂芙蓉Bing Di Fu Rong
  321. 扬州慢Yang Zhou Man
  322. 双双燕Shuang Shuang Yan
  323. 舞杨花Wu Yang Hua
  324. 万年欢Wan Nian Huan
  325. 陌上花Mo Shang Hua
  326. 宴山亭Yan Shan Ting
  327. 三部乐San Bu Yue
  328. 梦扬州Meng Yang Zhou
  329. 琐窗寒Suo Chuang Han
  330. 月下笛Yue Xia Di
  331. 丁香结Ding Xiang Jie
  332. 聒龙谣Guo Long Yao
  333. 十月桃Shi Yue Tao
  334. 催雪Cui Xue
  335. 蜀溪春Shu Xi Chun
  336. 念奴娇Nian Nu Jiao
  337. 解语花Jie Yu Hua
  338. 垂杨Chui Yang
  339. 八音谐Ba Yin Xie
  340. 大椿Da Chun
  341. 采绿吟Cai Lü Yin
  342. 惜寒梅Xi Han Mei
  343. 高阳台Gao Yang Tai
  344. 渡江云Du Jiang Yun
  345. 东风第一枝Dong Feng Di Yi Zhi
  346. 剪牡丹Jian Mu Dan
  347. 喜朝天Xi Chao Tian
  348. 玉烛新Yu Zhu Xin
  349. 翠楼吟Cui Lou Yin
  350. 湘月Xiang Yue
  351. 霓裳中序第一Ni Chang Zhong Xu Di Yi
  352. 疏帘淡月Shu Lian Dan Yue
  353. 花发状元红慢Hua Fa Zhuang Yuan Hong Man
  354. 水龙吟Shui Long Yin
  355. 台城路Tai Cheng Lu
  356. 宴清都Yan Qing Dou
  357. 曲游春Qu You Chun
  358. 湘春夜月Xiang Chun Ye Yue
  359. 恋芳春慢Lian Fang Chun Man
  360. 石州慢Shi Zhou Man
  361. 瑞鹤仙Rui He Xian
  362. 雨霖铃Yu Lin Ling
  363. 还京乐Huan Jing Yue
  364. 探春慢Tan Chun Man
  365. 升平乐Sheng Ping Yue
  366. 眉妩Mei Wu
  367. 二郎神Er Lang Shen
  368. 倾杯乐Qing Bei Yue
  369. 永遇乐Yong Yu Yue
  370. 惜余欢Xi Yu Huan
  371. 拜星月慢Bai Xing Yue Man
  372. 绮罗香Qi Luo Xiang
  373. 南浦Nan Pu
  374. 宴琼林Yan Qiong Lin
  375. 霜花腴Shuang Hua Yu
  376. 澡兰香Zao Lan Xiang
  377. 向湖边Xiang Hu Bian
  378. 送我入门来Song Wo Ru Men Lai
  379. 绕池游慢Rao Chi You Man
  380. 曲玉管Qu Yu Guan
  381. 西河Xi He
  382. 秋霁Qiu Ji
  383. 暗香疏影An Xiang Shu Ying
  384. 清风八咏楼Qing Feng Ba Yong Lou
  385. 望远行Wang Yuan Xing
  386. 泛清波摘遍Fan Qing Bo Zhai Bian
  387. 解连环Jie Lian Huan
  388. 夜飞鹊Ye Fei Que
  389. 望海潮Wang Hai Chao
  390. 角招Jue Shao
  391. 泛清苕Fan Qing Tiao
  392. 折红梅Zhe Hong Mei
  393. 一萼红Yi E Hong
  394. 无愁可解Wu Chou Ke Jie
  395. 杜韦娘Du Wei Niang
  396. 过秦楼Guo Qin Lou
  397. 风流子Feng Liu Zi
  398. 疏影Shu Ying
  399. 高山流水Gao Shan Liu Shui
  400. 斗婵娟Dou Chan Juan
  401. 惜余春慢Xi Yu Chun Man
  402. 期夜月Qi Ye Yue
  403. 沁园春Qin Yuan Chun
  404. 紫萸香慢Zi Yu Xiang Man
  405. 摸鱼儿Mo Yu Er
  406. 贺新郎He Xin Lang
  407. 吊严陵Diao Yan Ling
  408. 金明池Jin Ming Chi
  409. 画屏秋色Hua Ping Qiu Se
  410. 白苎Bai Zhu
  411. 春雪间早梅Chun Xue Jian Zao Mei
  412. 兰陵王Lan Ling Wang
  413. 破阵乐Po Zhen Yue
  414. 大酺Da Pu
  415. 多丽Duo Li
  416. 六丑Liu Chou
  417. 六州歌头Liu Zhou Ge Tou
  418. 夜半乐Ye Ban Yue
  419. 穆护砂Mu Hu Sha
  420. 三台San Tai
  421. 哨遍Shao Bian
  422. 莺啼序Ying Ti Xu