Guide
Every piece in One Thought, a Mortal Life is a ci—a classical Chinese song lyric written to a fixed tune. This guide starts at the beginning: what a ci is, what a tune pattern is and where it comes from, how to read one and how to write to one, and what place these patterns held in the lives of people long ago. Read it first, and you will find more to savor in the poems.
Ci: Poems Made to Be Sung
Put simply: if a shi, the classical Chinese poem, is something you recite, a ci is something you sing. The form arose in the Sui and Tang dynasties and flourished under the Northern and Southern Song, and it began life as words set to music. With a ci, the tune comes first and the words second: the writer follows the tune’s long and short phrases, its rises and falls, and “fills in” the words one character at a time.
The form has gone by many names, and each catches a different side of it:
- Quzi ci (words for a tune): the name used in the Tang and Five Dynasties, meaning simply “the lyrics of a song.” Tang and Five Dynasties manuscripts discovered at Dunhuang preserve a great many of these lyrics from ordinary people.
- Yuefu and yuezhang (songs and musical pieces): because ci could be set to music and sung, they carried on the yuefu song tradition of the Han and Wei, and Song-dynasty poets often called their own collections yuefu or yuezhang—as in Su Shi’s Dongpo yuefu (Dongpo’s Songs) and Liu Yong’s Yuezhang ji (Collected Songs).
- Changduan ju (long and short lines): the lines of a shi are mostly a regular five or seven characters, while the lines of a ci run long and short in a pleasing irregularity. Qin Guan’s collection bears exactly this name: Huaihai jushi changduan ju (Long and Short Lines of the Recluse of Huaihai).
- Shiyu (what is left over from poetry): a term that caught on from the Southern Song onward, meaning the ink a poet spends once the business of poetry is done—a name with a touch of modesty in it.
- Yisheng and tianci (leaning on the tune, filling in the words): these name the method itself—you lean on the sound of the melody and fill the words into it.
Cipai: The Name of a Tune
The tune a ci is written to has a name, and that name is its cipai, or tune pattern; it is also called a cidiao (ci tune) or diaoming (tune title).
Think of a tune pattern as the melody of a pop song: the same melody can carry many different sets of lyrics, and whatever words you give it, it is still the same tune. Or think of it as a sheet of squared writing paper with the grid already drawn: how many sections, how many lines in each, how many characters to a line, which square must rhyme, which takes a level tone and which an oblique one (more on these tones below)—all of it is settled in advance, and the writer has only to set the words down in the squares.
What a tune pattern lays down is mainly this:
- How many sections: each section of a ci is called a pian, a stanza. A ci of a single stanza is called dandiao; two stanzas is by far the most common, and some have three or four;
- How many lines in all, how many characters in each line, and where each line pauses;
- Where the rhymes fall, whether they are level-tone or oblique-tone rhymes, and whether the rhyme changes partway through;
- Whether each character takes a level or an oblique tone, and which positions allow some leeway.
A single tune pattern often goes by several names—“one tune, many names.” Most of these were coined later from a line in a famous poem: Nian Nu Jiao, for instance, is also called Da Jiang Dong Qu (East Flows the Great River) and Lei Jiang Yue (A Libation to the River Moon), both taken from Su Shi’s celebrated piece to that tune. There are also patterns that share a name but not a melody—“one name, different tunes.” And a tune pattern often exists in several slightly different forms, which the formularies, the reference books that chart each pattern, list as “variant forms.”
The Skeleton of a Ci
- Pian (stanza): one section of a ci, also called a que, bian or die. A ci of just one stanza is called dandiao, such as Shi Liu Zi Ling or Yi Jiang Nan; two stanzas is the most common, conventionally called shuangdiao; there are also long tunes of three or four stanzas, the longest being Ying Ti Xu, four stanzas and 240 characters in all. At the short end, one form of Zhu Zhi has only two lines of fourteen characters, and Shi Liu Zi Ling has just sixteen.
- Que: a whole ci can also be counted as “one que,” and its first and second stanzas are likewise called the upper que and the lower que.
- Xiaoling, zhongdiao, changdiao (short lyrics, medium tunes, long tunes): Ming scholars sorted ci by character count, and the Qing scholar Mao Xianshu drew the lines: up to 58 characters is a xiaoling, 59 to 90 a zhongdiao, and 91 or more a changdiao, also called a manci. This is only a rough division; different forms of the same tune pattern often cross the boundaries.
- Huantou (changing the head): when the opening lines of the second stanza differ from those of the first, this is called huantou, or guopian (crossing the stanza). It is often where the poem’s thought takes a turn—like a song switching to a different style of singing when it reaches the second verse.
- Lingzi (leading word): long tunes often use a single character to lead the several lines that follow, like 渐 (jiàn, “gradually”) in Liu Yong’s Ba Sheng Gan Zhou: “Gradually the frosty wind grows keen and cold, the passes and rivers lie desolate, the last light falls upon the tower.” A leading word usually takes the departing tone (the four tones are explained below), which makes it sound strong, like a downbeat in music.
- Dieju (repeated lines): some tune patterns require a line or a few characters to be repeated, like “Like a dream, like a dream” in Ru Meng Ling, or “Wrong, wrong, wrong!” at the close of Chai Tou Feng.
Ci, Shi and Qu: Differences and Styles
How Ci Differs from Shi
- Lines: shi lines are mostly a regular five or seven characters; in a ci, line length follows the tune, anywhere from a single character to a dozen or so.
- Rhyme: regulated verse (lüshi, the strictest form of shi) usually rhymes only on level tones, keeping one rhyme from start to finish; in a ci, the tune pattern decides where the rhymes fall, rhymes can be level or oblique, and the rhyme can change partway through.
- Structure: a ci is divided into stanzas and has features such as the change at the head of the second stanza, leading words and repeated lines (all explained above), none of which shi have.
- Voice and feeling: shi can be chanted, while ci were originally sung to music. An old saying holds that shi is dignified and ci alluring: shi tends toward the solemn expression of one’s aims, while ci excels at delicate, elusive stirrings of the heart.
How Ci Differs from Qu
Ci and qu are close relatives—alike in looks, different in temperament:
- Qu may add chenzi, “padding words,” outside the metrical pattern, which makes them more colloquial and lively to sing; ci generally do not. As the Qing scholar Wan Shu put it, qu have padding words and ci have none.
- Qu can link several tunes in the same musical mode (gongdiao, explained below) into a suite that tells a story; a ci mostly stands alone as a single piece.
- Qu rhyme more densely and speak in plainer, more direct language; ci prize restraint and implication.
- Qu are still sung today in Kunqu and other forms of Chinese opera, and their tunes remain living music; most of the scores of Song ci have been lost, and the tune patterns now survive mainly as metrical forms for words.
The Delicate and the Bold
Zhang Yan of the Ming divided ci broadly into two styles: wanyue, the delicate and restrained, and haofang, the bold and unrestrained. The delicate style is subtle and tender, writing mostly of parting, longing and the sorrows of one’s lot; Liu Yong, Qin Guan and Li Qingzhao are its representative voices. The bold style is broad and expansive, writing mostly of mountains and rivers, meditations on the past and lofty ambitions; Su Shi and Xin Qiji represent it. This is only a rough division, and many poets wrote in both manners.
From Yuefu to Ci to Qu: Every Age Has Its Songs
Chinese poetry has always gone hand in hand with music. One way to see it: yuefu were the popular songs of the Han, Wei and Six Dynasties, ci the popular songs of the Tang and Song, and qu the popular songs of the Yuan and Ming. Every age has its own songs, and its own way of writing words to them.
- Pre-Qin: the three hundred and more pieces of the Shijing (Classic of Poetry) could all originally be sung.
- Han: Emperor Wu established the Yuefu, or Music Bureau, a government office that gathered songs from every region and set them to music for performance; their lyrics are known as yuefu poems. Later, poetry and song gradually went their separate ways: what could be sung was called yuefu, and what was meant only for reciting was called shi.
- Sui and Tang: music from the Western Regions mingled with the older music of the Central Plains to form yanyue, banquet music (the yan is sometimes written with a different character of the same sound), and new tunes poured forth. Court musicians and men of letters wrote words to the rhythms of these new tunes, the lines running long or short as the melody did—and so the ci was born. Emperor Xuanzong of Tang (r. 712–756) set up the Jiaofang, an office in charge of popular music at court; of the more than three hundred tune names that Cui Lingqin recorded in his Jiaofang ji (Records of the Court Music Office), many later became tune patterns, such as Pu Sa Man, Xi Jiang Yue and Ding Feng Bo.
- Late Tang and Five Dynasties: Wen Tingyun wrote ci in great numbers. In the Later Shu, Zhao Chongzuo compiled the Huajian ji (Among the Flowers, 940), five hundred ci by eighteen poets—the earliest surviving anthology of ci by literati. Li Yu of the Southern Tang poured the grief of a lost kingdom into his ci, and with him the form’s horizons opened wide.
- Northern Song: Liu Yong wrote mostly long, slow pieces known as manci (“slow lyrics”), which were sung everywhere; Su Shi brought the spirit of shi into ci and wrote with the sweep of “East flows the great river”; Zhou Bangyan was a master of music. Under Emperor Huizong the court established the Dasheng Bureau to put the tunes in order, the number of ci tunes grew to more than two hundred, and the form reached its height.
- Southern Song: Xin Qiji wrote his devotion to his country into his ci; Jiang Kui composed his own music and left seventeen ci with their musical notation, precious material today for studying the music of Song ci. By the late Southern Song, the scores of ci were gradually being lost.
- Yuan and Ming: new music arose in the north, and sanqu (art songs) and zaju (variety plays) took over the role of the sung word. The tunes they followed are called qupai, and many qupai names came straight from ci tune patterns.
- Qing: the ci enjoyed a revival. Wan Shu compiled the Cilü (Ci Prosody); Wang Yiqing and others, by order of the Kangxi Emperor, compiled the Qinding cipu (Imperial Formulary of Ci Patterns), with 826 tunes in 2,306 forms; and Ge Zai compiled the Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci). The rules of ci writing were set down in books that are still in use today.
Where Tune Patterns Came From
The four hundred or so common tune patterns came, broadly speaking, from these sources:
- Music of the court and the Jiaofang: many tune patterns began as Tang Jiaofang tunes. Take Pu Sa Man (Bodhisattva Barbarians): legend has it that when envoys from the kingdom of Nüman came to the court of Emperor Xuanzong of Tang (r. 846–859), they wore their hair piled high, with golden crowns and strings of jewels hung all over them, and people called them the “bodhisattva barbarian troupe”; the court musicians wrote a new tune inspired by them.
- Folk songs: Zhu Zhi (Bamboo Branch) was originally a folk song of the Ba–Yu region, around today’s Chongqing; this book’s Ai Nai Qu (Song of the Oars) was written by the Tang poet Yuan Jie during his posting in Daozhou, modeled on the songs boatmen sang as they rowed.
- Famous lines: a line from the earliest poem written to a tune became the tune’s name. Yi Jian Mei (A Spray of Plum) comes from Zhou Bangyan’s line about a single cut spray of plum blossom, lovely in ten thousand ways; this book’s Qiu Ye Yue (Autumn Night Moon) comes from phrases in a ci by Yin E of the Five Dynasties—“the fine festival of late autumn” and “deep in the night, a few slanting beams of moonlight pierce the window.”
- People, stories and places: Nian Nu Jiao takes its name from Niannu, a celebrated Tang singer; Gan Zhou, Yi Zhou and Liang Zhou were originally daqu—the long, many-movement suites of court music—named after prefectures on the northwestern frontier.
- Tunes poets composed themselves: poets well versed in music wrote their own melodies and named them, as Jiang Kui did with Yang Zhou Man (Slow Song of Yangzhou), An Xiang (Hidden Fragrance), Shu Ying (Sparse Shadows) and Qi Liang Fan (Desolate Modulation).
- Old names, new music: an old title from Six Dynasties yuefu or an earlier age was kept and a new melody composed for it; Wu Ye Ti (Crows Cry at Night), for example, was originally an old yuefu title of the Southern Dynasties.
- Sections cut from grand suites: the daqu of the Tang and Song were very long, and a single section could be lifted out to become a tune of its own—Shui Diao Ge Tou, for example, takes the opening of the suite Shui Diao (Water Melody).
- Variations on an existing tune: adding characters, dropping characters, or changing the tempo or the mode produced new tunes, and the tune title often carries a marker of this—see the next section.
Telltale Words in Tune Titles
First, a term that comes up often: gongdiao, the musical mode. It was the system of modes in old Chinese music, rather like saying C major or A minor today; the mode a tune belonged to determined its pitch and its color.
Tune titles often end in a word that works like a model number, telling you the tune’s length, its rhythm, or what it was varied from:
| Word | Meaning | Examples |
|---|---|---|
| 令 (lìng) | A short tune. At Tang banquets, each song sung went with a round of wine, and one song made one ling. | Ru Meng Ling, Shi Liu Zi Ling |
| 引 (yǐn) | An existing short tune drawn out into a longer, new melody. | Qian Qiu Sui Yin |
| 近 (jìn) | Short for jinpai; in length it falls between a ling and a man. | Zhu Ying Tai Jin, Guo Lang Er Jin Pai |
| 慢 (màn) | A long tune with a slow, unhurried tempo and longer lines. | Sheng Sheng Man, Yang Zhou Man, Tan Chun Man |
| 犯 (fàn) | The tune shifts into another mode partway through, or phrases from several tunes are joined together. | Qi Liang Fan, Si Fan Jian Mei Hua |
| 摊破 (tān pò) | Characters added to the original tune, stretching a phrase or changing the shape of a line. | Tan Po Huan Xi Sha |
| 减字 (jiǎn zì), 偷声 (tōu shēng) | Characters taken away and syllables dropped. | Jian Zi Mu Lan Hua, Tou Sheng Mu Lan Hua |
| 促拍 (cù pāi) | A quickened tempo. | Cu Pai Cai Sang Zi |
| 转调 (zhuǎn diào) | The whole tune moved into another mode to be sung. | Zhuan Diao Er Lang Shen |
| 歌头 (gē tóu), 摘遍 (zhāi biàn) | A section taken from a grand suite: getou takes the opening, zhaibian lifts out one movement from within. | Shui Diao Ge Tou, Liu Zhou Ge Tou, Bo Mei Zhai Bian |
A few characters in tune titles are easy to misread. 乐, meaning a piece of music, is read yuè, as in Qing Bei Yue and Sheng Ping Yue; 更 in Geng Lou Zi refers to the watches of the night and is read gēng; 调 in Shui Diao Ge Tou means a tune and is read diào; and 幺 in Liu Yao Ling is read yāo.
Title and Content: From Writing to the Tune’s Name to Borrowing Its Mood
The link between a tune’s name and what a ci is about can be close or loose, and it changed over time.
At first, the tune title was the subject. Ci of the Tang and Five Dynasties were mostly written about whatever the tune’s name said. As Huang Sheng of the Southern Song observed in his Hua’an cixuan (Hua’an’s Anthology of Ci), Tang ci were mostly composed on their titles: a Lin Jiang Xian (Immortal by the River) spoke of immortals, a Nü Guan Zi (The Daoist Priestess) told of the Daoist life, and a He Du Shen (Spirit of the River) sang of shrines and temples. A ci written to the original meaning of its tune title was said to follow its “original sense” (benyi). Think of “Happy Birthday”: a song made to be sung on birthdays.
Later, title and content gradually drifted apart. When a lovely tune spread far and wide, people borrowed it to write about other things on their minds; as Huang Sheng goes on to say, things slowly changed, until the poems wandered far from their titles. It is like a moving melody that many people write new words to, until what is sung is no longer what the song was first about. So that readers would know what a given piece was about, Song poets began adding a title or a short preface after the tune name. Before his Shui Diao Ge Tou, for instance, Su Shi wrote: “Mid-Autumn of the bingchen year (1076). I drank happily until dawn, got thoroughly drunk, and wrote this piece, thinking also of Ziyou”—his younger brother.
Drifting apart did not mean losing touch. A tune carries feeling of its own, and a poet who knew the craft matched tune to feeling, just as no one would pair a wedding invitation with a funeral dirge: bold, stirring or tragic feeling went naturally to Man Jiang Hong or Liu Zhou Ge Tou, lingering sorrow at parting to Yi Jian Mei or Yu Lin Ling. Many poets also made a point of letting the tune title and the poem echo each other, so that the title set the poem’s undertone before a word of it was read.
This book is written the same way. The tune title and the poem often mirror each other, and after the “·” comes a title that pins down which moment, which event, the piece is about. Take Qiu Ye Yue · Before First Light: “Qiu Ye Yue” (Autumn Night Moon) spreads out the autumn night and its moonlight, while “Before First Light” brings the lens to rest on the moment when the sky is about to brighten but has not yet. Think of the tune title as the name of a song, and the title after it as the name of this particular performance.
What Tune Patterns Meant in Old China
- For singing: at banquets, farewells, seasonal festivals and birthday celebrations, singers were called on to perform ci to their tunes. The Song writer Ye Mengde recorded that Liu Yong’s ci had spread so widely that wherever there was a well to drink from, people could sing Liu Yong—like a pop song today that you hear wherever you go.
- For friendship: because a tune pattern’s form is fixed, friends could trade poems back and forth on the same tune and the same rhymes, and later poets could answer those who came centuries before them. Xin Qiji and Chen Liang exchanged poems in just this way to the tune He Xin Lang.
- For setting the mood: every tune has its own voice and feeling, so choosing a tune pattern also set the emotional undertone of a poem.
- As a set of rules: once the music was lost, tune patterns became metrical forms for words; generation after generation wrote to them, and so the ci has lived on to this day.
- As keepers of history: the tune names themselves are like a small museum, holding a Tang court dance troupe (Pu Sa Man), a famous singer (Nian Nu Jiao), the northwestern frontier (Gan Zhou, Yi Zhou), folk songs (Zhu Zhi) and tales of men of letters. To read a tune title is also to read a piece of the past.
- Opening the way for what followed: the sanqu and zaju of the Yuan and Ming, and later Kunqu opera, were all sung to qupai, a system inherited directly from ci tune patterns.
Level and Oblique: The Four Tones
Classical Chinese had four tones: ping (level), shang (rising), qu (departing) and ru (entering). The level tone formed a class of its own, called ping; the rising, departing and entering tones together formed the other class, called ze, the oblique tones. Think of a level tone as a note held long in singing, steady and open, and of the oblique tones as shorter and more clipped, with a rise or a fall. It is the interplay of level and oblique that gives a line its rise and fall.
In Standard Mandarin, roughly speaking, the first and second tones count as level and the third and fourth as oblique. Watch out, though, for characters that once had the entering tone, such as 一 (yī), 白 (bái), 竹 (zhú), 国 (guó) and 学 (xué): in Mandarin they are now pronounced with level tones, but by the old pronunciation they count as oblique. Writing to the old rhymes, based on historical pronunciation, you must check them one by one; writing to the new rhymes, Mandarin pronunciation is the standard.
Ci are more exacting about tone than regulated verse. Regulated verse mostly just tells level from oblique; a ci, at certain key positions, also distinguishes the rising tone from the departing tone. Poets in the line of Zhou Bangyan, Jiang Kui and Wu Wenying were especially particular about this, because those characters had to fit the rise and fall of the melody.
Rhyme
To rhyme is to place characters with the same or similar finals—the vowel and any ending sound of a syllable—at set positions, so that they answer one another, like the note a song keeps coming back to.
- The tune pattern sets the rhyme positions: some rhyme on every line, some only every few lines.
- Level and oblique rhymes: some tune patterns rhyme on level tones, like Shi Liu Zi Ling and Huan Xi Sha; some on oblique tones, like Man Jiang Hong and Yu Lin Ling; and some alternate between the two, like Ding Feng Bo and Qing Ping Yue, both used in this book.
- Entering-tone rhymes: some tune patterns customarily rhyme on entering-tone characters—Man Jiang Hong, Nian Nu Jiao and Yu Lin Ling among them—which sound short and forceful. Mandarin no longer has an entering tone, so when you write to such a tune using the new rhymes, you choose your rhymes by today’s pronunciation.
- Changing rhyme: a ci can switch partway through from one rhyme group to another, and the formularies mark this specially.
- Within a single ci, try not to use the same rhyme character twice.
Which rhyme book to follow: Song poets had no official rhymes for ci; they broadly followed the speech of their day, which allowed more freedom than the rules for shi. In the Qing, Ge Zai compiled the Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci), sorting the rhymes of ci into nineteen groups, and it became the rhyme book later writers relied on most. Many writers today also use new rhymes: the Zhonghua xinyun (New Chinese Rhymes, fourteen groups), based on Standard Mandarin, or the shisan zhe (Thirteen Rhyme Tracks) shared by Chinese opera and the folk performing arts.
This book rhymes by the Thirteen Tracks of the new rhymes. Each track gathers characters whose finals are close enough to rhyme with one another—like putting all the words that rhyme together into the same drawer:
| Track | Finals | Example |
|---|---|---|
| 一七 (yī qī) | i、ü、er | 西 |
| 姑苏 (gū sū) | u | 出 |
| 发花 (fā huā) | a、ia、ua | 佳 |
| 梭波 (suō bō) | o、e、uo | 坐 |
| 乜斜 (miē xié) | ie、üe | 捏 |
| 怀来 (huái lái) | ai、uai | 来 |
| 灰堆 (huī duī) | ei、ui | 北 |
| 遥条 (yáo tiáo) | ao、iao | 俏 |
| 由求 (yóu qiú) | ou、iu | 扭 |
| 言前 (yán qián) | an、ian、uan、üan | 南 |
| 人辰 (rén chén) | en、in、un、ün | 人 |
| 江阳 (jiāng yáng) | ang、iang、uang | 房 |
| 中东 (zhōng dōng) | eng、ing、ong、iong | 东 |
How to Read a Pattern Chart
A formulary (cipu) gives each tune pattern as a kind of grid, marking the tone every character should take and where the rhymes fall. Formularies differ somewhat in their symbols; below we use the set found in Cipai shili (Tune Patterns Explained with Examples):
- 平
- Level tone (píng): this character takes a level tone
- 仄
- Oblique tone (zè): this character takes an oblique tone
- 平
- Circled: should take a level tone, but an oblique tone is allowed
- 仄
- Circled: should take an oblique tone, but a level tone is allowed
- ○
- Placed beneath a character: a rhyme falls here, on a level tone
- △
- Placed beneath a character: a rhyme falls here, on an oblique tone
- ●
- When the whole ci rhymes on level tones: from here, switch to a new group of level-tone rhymes
- ▲
- When the whole ci rhymes on oblique tones: from here, switch to a new group of oblique-tone rhymes
Other formularies often use other conventions: some mark “either tone” with ⊙ or 中 (zhōng, “middle”); some mark rhymes and changes of rhyme with characters such as 韵 (yùn, “rhyme”), 叶 (xié, “in rhyme”) and 换 (huàn, “change”), and mark the pause at the end of a line and within it with 句 (jù) and 读 (dòu).
The punctuation in a chart shows the pauses: a comma or a full stop is where you pause, and the rhyme mark sits beneath the rhyming character. Below are three tune patterns as Cipai shili sets them out, from simple to complex.
Example One · Shi Liu Zi Ling (Sixteen-Character Song): The Basics
Four lines and sixteen characters in all, with level-tone rhymes on the first, second and fourth lines:
平○。
平仄平平仄仄平○。
平平仄,
仄仄仄平平○。
天○!
休教圆蟾照客眠○。
人何在?
桂影自婵娟○。
Read the two side by side. The first line is a single character, which must take a level tone and must rhyme. The second line has seven characters, of which the first and fifth allow leeway. The third line, level-level-oblique, does not rhyme. In the fourth line the first character allows leeway, and the last one rhymes. Cai Shen’s 天, 眠 and 娟 fall exactly on the three rhyme positions.
Example Two · Pu Sa Man: Level and Oblique Rhymes in Turn
Two stanzas of four lines each, forty-four characters in all. In each stanza the first two lines rhyme on oblique tones and the last two on level tones:
平平仄仄平平仄△,
平平仄仄平平仄△。
仄仄仄平平○,
仄平平仄平○。
仄平平仄仄△,
仄仄平平仄△。
平仄仄平平○,
平平平仄平○。
平林漠漠烟如织△,
寒山一带伤心碧△。
暝色入高楼○,
有人楼上愁○。
玉阶空伫立△,
宿鸟归飞急△。
何处是归程○?
长亭连短亭○。
This tune moves through four rhymes: the first stanza opens on the oblique rhymes 织 and 碧, then shifts to the level rhymes 楼 and 愁; the second stanza takes up a new pair of oblique rhymes, 立 and 急, then a new pair of level ones, 程 and 亭. Because oblique and level rhymes alternate, every change of rhyme is plain to see, so Cipai shili needs only △ and ○, with no call for ● or ▲.
Example Three · Sao Di Wu: Oblique Throughout, with a Change of Group
Two stanzas of seven lines each, fifty-eight characters in all. Every line rhymes, all on oblique tones; in each stanza the second line repeats the rhyme character of the first; and the second stanza moves to a new group of rhymes:
平仄仄△,仄仄仄△,
仄平仄平平仄仄△。
平仄仄△,平仄仄△。
仄仄平平平仄仄△,仄平仄△。
仄仄仄▲,仄仄仄▲,
仄平仄平仄仄仄▲。
平仄仄▲,仄仄仄▲。
仄仄平平平仄仄▲,仄平仄▲。
酥点萼△,玉碾萼△,
点时碾时香雪薄△。
才折得△,春力弱△。
半掩朱扉垂绣幕△,怕吹落△。
捻一晌▲,嗅一晌▲,
捻时嗅时宿酒忘▲。
春笋上▲,不忍放▲。
待对菱花斜插向▲,宝钗上▲。
The first stanza rhymes on one group of oblique rhymes—萼, 薄, 得, 弱, 幕, 落—marked with △. The second stanza changes to another group—晌, 忘, 上, 放, 向—still oblique, so the tones alone will not tell you the rhyme has changed; Cipai shili therefore switches to ▲ as a reminder. By the same logic, when a ci rhymes on level tones throughout and changes group partway, ● is used. One Thought, a Mortal Life also includes a poem to Sao Di Wu.
How to Look Up a Tune Pattern in Cipai shili
- Find it: the book is arranged by character count, from fewest to most, with a stroke-count index at the back, so you can find the page by the number of strokes in the tune title. The list of 422 tune patterns at the end of this page follows the book’s order as well.
- Read it: each entry gives, in order, the tune’s other names, its origin, a description of its form (how many stanzas, how many lines, how many characters, which lines rhyme, and whether on level or oblique tones) and the chart, followed by an example poem—usually the earliest one—with the author named in parentheses at the end.
- Use it: read the description first, to get the outline in mind; then go through the chart, matching the tone and rhyme marks character by character; finally, set it against the example poem and see which character each mark falls on.
- Go further: a tune pattern often has several forms, and the book generally gives just one. To see the others, turn to the Qinding cipu and the Cilü.
How to Write a Ci
Writing a ci is like singing from a score: the score is fixed, but the feeling you sing into it is your own. Roughly, you can take it step by step:
- Decide what to write about: the matter you want to set down and the mood you want to carry.
- Choose a tune: pick a tune pattern whose voice suits the feeling, or one whose title echoes your theme. Beginners do well to start with short lyrics (xiaoling) such as Shi Liu Zi Ling, Yi Jiang Nan, Ru Meng Ling, Chang Xiang Si, Huan Xi Sha and Zhe Gu Tian.
- Find the pattern: look the tune up in a formulary such as the Qinding cipu, the Cilü or Cipai shili, choose one of its forms, and copy out the pattern.
- Read model poems: first read a few famous pieces written to the tune, to get a feel for its phrasing, its pauses and the turn at the head of the second stanza.
- Settle the rhyme: choose a rhyme group (this book uses the Thirteen Tracks) and list the rhyme characters you can use before you start.
- Fill in the words by the pattern: check level and oblique tones line by line, taking leeway where either tone is allowed; use departing-tone characters for leading words where you can; and keep the pauses within each line in step with the pattern.
- Look it over: count the characters, check the tones, check the rhymes and any change of rhyme, and make sure no rhyme character is used twice.
- Read it aloud: ci were made to be sung, and only when a poem flows easily off the tongue, with a rise and fall, has it truly found its tune.
Further Reading
To go deeper, you might read: the Qinding cipu (Imperial Formulary of Ci Patterns); Wan Shu, Cilü (Ci Prosody); Ge Zai, Cilin zhengyun (Correct Rhymes for Ci); Yan Jianwen, Cipai shili (Tune Patterns Explained with Examples); Long Yusheng, Tang Song ci gelü (Metrical Patterns of Tang and Song Ci); Wang Li, Shici gelü (Metrical Patterns of Shi and Ci); and Shi Zhecun, Cixue mingci shiyi (Terms of Ci Studies Explained).
Four Hundred and Twenty-Two Tune Patterns
Below are the 422 tune patterns collected in Cipai shili, compiled by Yan Jianwen, arranged by character count from fewest to most—from short lyrics of a dozen or so characters all the way to the 240-character Ying Ti Xu. Those highlighted in color are used in this book; select one to read that poem.
- 竹枝词Zhu Zhi Ci
- 十六字令Shi Liu Zi Ling
- 闲中好Xian Zhong Hao
- 纥那曲He Na Qu
- 梧桐影Wu Tong Ying
- 拜新月Bai Xin Yue
- 罗唝曲Luo Hong Qu
- 醉妆词Zui Zhuang Ci
- 南歌子Nan Ge Zi
- 回波乐Hui Bo Yue
- 三台令San Tai Ling
- 舞马词Wu Ma Ci
- 晴偏好Qing Pian Hao
- 一点春Yi Dian Chun
- 塞姑Sai Gu
- 柘枝引Zhe Zhi Yin
- 花非花Hua Fei Hua
- 摘得新Zhai De Xin
- 渔歌子Yu Ge Zi
- 章台柳Zhang Tai Liu
- 潇湘神Xiao Xiang Shen
- 忆江南Yi Jiang Nan
- 赤枣子Chi Zao Zi
- 解红Jie Hong
- 捣练子Dao Lian Zi
- 桂殿秋Gui Dian Qiu
- 欸乃曲Ai Nai Qu
- 杨柳枝Yang Liu Zhi
- 金缕曲Jin Lü Qu
- 八拍蛮Ba Pai Man
- 春莺啭Chun Ying Zhuan
- 十样花Shi Yang Hua
- 小秦王Xiao Qin Wang
- 字字双Zi Zi Shuang
- 水调歌Shui Diao Ge
- 阿那曲E Nuo Qu
- 甘州曲Gan Zhou Qu
- 醉吟商Zui Yin Shang
- 干荷叶Gan He Ye
- 抛球乐Pao Qiu Yue
- 踏歌词Ta Ge Ci
- 江南春Jiang Nan Chun
- 法驾导引Fa Jia Dao Yin
- 蕃女怨Fan Nü Yuan
- 一叶落Yi Ye Luo
- 忆王孙Yi Wang Sun
- 金字经Jin Zi Jing
- 遐方怨Xia Fang Yuan
- 调笑令Tiao Xiao Ling
- 诉衷情Su Zhong Qing
- 如梦令Ru Meng Ling
- 西溪子Xi Xi Zi
- 天仙子Tian Xian Zi
- 定西番Ding Xi Fan
- 长相思Chang Xiang Si
- 思帝乡Si Di Xiang
- 何满子He Man Zi
- 风光好Feng Guang Hao
- 相见欢Xiang Jian Huan
- 误桃源Wu Tao Yuan
- 上行杯Shang Xing Bei
- 望梅花Wang Mei Hua
- 醉太平Zui Tai Ping
- 感恩多Gan En Duo
- 长命女Chang Ming Nü
- 怨回纥Yuan Hui He
- 酒泉子Jiu Quan Zi
- 生查子Sheng Zha Zi
- 醉公子Zui Gong Zi
- 蝴蝶儿Hu Die Er
- 春光好Chun Guang Hao
- 昭君怨Zhao Jun Yuan
- 女冠子Nü Guan Zi
- 纱窗恨Sha Chuang Hen
- 醉花间Zui Hua Jian
- 点绛唇Dian Jiang Chun
- 归国遥Gui Guo Yao
- 浣溪沙Huan Xi Sha
- 恋情深Lian Qing Shen
- 沙塞子Sha Sai Zi
- 水仙子Shui Xian Zi
- 清商怨Qing Shang Yuan
- 伤春怨Shang Chun Yuan
- 霜天晓角Shuang Tian Xiao Jiao
- 菩萨蛮Pu Sa Man
- 采桑子Cai Sang Zi
- 后庭花Hou Ting Hua
- 卜算子Bu Suan Zi
- 好时光Hao Shi Guang
- 谒金门Ye Jin Men
- 柳含烟Liu Han Yan
- 华清引Hua Qing Yin
- 天门谣Tian Men Yao
- 散余霞San Yu Xia
- 好事近Hao Shi Jin
- 清平乐Qing Ping Yue
- 忆秦娥Yi Qin E
- 更漏子Geng Lou Zi
- 巫山一段云Wu Shan Yi Duan Yun
- 望仙门Wang Xian Men
- 占春芳Zhan Chun Fang
- 朝天子Chao Tian Zi
- 落梅风Luo Mei Feng
- 江亭怨Jiang Ting Yuan
- 眉峰碧Mei Feng Bi
- 阮郎归Ruan Lang Gui
- 乌夜啼Wu Ye Ti
- 贺圣朝He Sheng Chao
- 喜迁莺Xi Qian Ying
- 珠帘卷Zhu Lian Juan
- 画堂春Hua Tang Chun
- 喜长新Xi Chang Xin
- 金盏子令Jin Zhan Zi Ling
- 谪仙怨Zhe Xian Yuan
- 三字令San Zi Ling
- 摊破浣溪沙Tan Po Huan Xi Sha
- 忆余杭Yi Yu Hang
- 撼庭秋Han Ting Qiu
- 洞天春Dong Tian Chun
- 人月圆Ren Yue Yuan
- 庆春时Qing Chun Shi
- 海棠春Hai Tang Chun
- 眼儿媚Yan Er Mei
- 双鸂鶒Shuang Xi Chi
- 伊州三台Yi Zhou San Tai
- 双头莲令Shuang Tou Lian Ling
- 梅弄影Mei Nong Ying
- 桃源忆故人Tao Yuan Yi Gu Ren
- 朝中措Chao Zhong Cuo
- 武陵春Wu Ling Chun
- 河渎神He Du Shen
- 双韵子Shuang Yun Zi
- 归去来Gui Qu Lai
- 醉乡春Zui Xiang Chun
- 极相思Ji Xiang Si
- 柳梢青Liu Shao Qing
- 荷叶杯He Ye Bei
- 满宫花Man Gong Hua
- 少年游Shao Nian You
- 滴滴金Di Di Jin
- 忆汉月Yi Han Yue
- 西江月Xi Jiang Yue
- 烛影摇红Zhu Ying Yao Hong
- 梁州令Liang Zhou Ling
- 盐角儿Yan Jiao Er
- 怨三三Yuan San San
- 四犯令Si Fan Ling
- 桂华明Gui Hua Ming
- 促拍采桑子Cu Pai Cai Sang Zi
- 折丹桂Zhe Dan Gui
- 城头月Cheng Tou Yue
- 花前饮Hua Qian Yin
- 破字令Po Zi Ling
- 导引Dao Yin
- 惜分飞Xi Fen Fei
- 思越人Si Yue Ren
- 探春令Tan Chun Ling
- 越江吟Yue Jiang Yin
- 燕归梁Yan Gui Liang
- 秋夜雨Qiu Ye Yu
- 伊州令Yi Zhou Ling
- 木笪Mu Da
- 醉红妆Zui Hong Zhuang
- 思远人Si Yuan Ren
- 望江东Wang Jiang Dong
- 倾杯令Qing Bei Ling
- 入塞Ru Sai
- 醉花阴Zui Hua Yin
- 浪淘沙Lang Tao Sha
- 金错刀Jin Cuo Dao
- 卖花声Mai Hua Sheng
- 天下乐Tian Xia Yue
- 江月晃重山Jiang Yue Huang Chong Shan
- 安阳好An Yang Hao
- 撷芳词Xie Fang Ci
- 鬓边华Bin Bian Hua
- 鹦鹉曲Ying Wu Qu
- 南乡一剪梅Nan Xiang Yi Jian Mei
- 一七令Yi Qi Ling
- 河传He Chuan
- 木兰花Mu Lan Hua
- 金莲绕凤楼Jin Lian Rao Feng Lou
- 夜行船Ye Xing Chuan
- 鹧鸪天Zhe Gu Tian
- 虞美人Yu Mei Ren
- 玉楼春Yu Lou Chun
- 瑞鹧鸪Rui Zhe Gu
- 市桥柳Shi Qiao Liu
- 翻香令Fan Xiang Ling
- 遍地锦Bian Di Jin
- 清江曲Qing Jiang Qu
- 楼上曲Lou Shang Qu
- 鹊桥仙Que Qiao Xian
- 南乡子Nan Xiang Zi
- 家山好Jia Shan Hao
- 夜游宫Ye You Gong
- 一斛珠Yi Hu Zhu
- 临江仙Lin Jiang Xian
- 踏莎行Ta Suo Xing
- 倚西楼Yi Xi Lou
- 扫地舞Sao Di Wu
- 小重山Xiao Chong Shan
- 蝶恋花Die Lian Hua
- 寿山曲Shou Shan Qu
- 荷华媚He Hua Mei
- 黄金缕Huang Jin Lü
- 一剪梅Yi Jian Mei
- 寻梅Xun Mei
- 锦帐春Jin Zhang Chun
- 钗头凤Chai Tou Feng
- 南楼令Nan Lou Ling
- 后庭宴Hou Ting Yan
- 定风波Ding Feng Bo
- 渔家傲Yu Jia Ao
- 破阵子Po Zhen Zi
- 苏幕遮Su Mu Zhe
- 金蕉叶Jin Jiao Ye
- 明月逐人来Ming Yue Zhu Ren Lai
- 甘州遍Gan Zhou Bian
- 别怨Bie Yuan
- 怜薄命Lian Bo Ming
- 麦秀两歧Mai Xiu Liang Qi
- 酷相思Ku Xiang Si
- 解佩令Jie Pei Ling
- 谢池春Xie Chi Chun
- 玉梅令Yu Mei Ling
- 行香子Xing Xiang Zi
- 感皇恩Gan Huang En
- 青玉案Qing Yu An
- 钿带长中腔Dian Dai Chang Zhong Qiang
- 三奠子San Dian Zi
- 看花回Kan Hua Hui
- 拾翠羽Shi Cui Yu
- 连理枝Lian Li Zhi
- 江城子Jiang Cheng Zi
- 小镇西犯Xiao Zhen Xi Fan
- 三登乐San Deng Yue
- 卓牌子近Zhuo Pai Zi Jin
- 檐前铁Yan Qian Tie
- 千秋岁Qian Qiu Sui
- 粉蝶儿Fen Die Er
- 师师令Shi Shi Ling
- 郭郎儿近拍Guo Lang Er Jin Pai
- 隔浦莲近拍Ge Pu Lian Jin Pai
- 百媚娘Bai Mei Niang
- 风入松Feng Ru Song
- 传言玉女Chuan Yan Yu Nü
- 越溪春Yue Xi Chun
- 下水船Xia Shui Chuan
- 扑蝴蝶Pu Hu Die
- 荔枝香Li Zhi Xiang
- 婆罗门引Po Luo Men Yin
- 韵令Yun Ling
- 春声碎Chun Sheng Sui
- 御街行Yu Jie Xing
- 离亭宴Li Ting Yan
- 侧犯Ce Fan
- 祝英台近Zhu Ying Tai Jin
- 阳关引Yang Guan Yin
- 一丛花Yi Cong Hua
- 安公子An Gong Zi
- 金人捧露盘Jin Ren Peng Lu Pan
- 拂霓裳Fu Ni Chang
- 柳腰轻Liu Yao Qing
- 南州春色Nan Zhou Chun Se
- 蓦山溪Mo Shan Xi
- 洞仙歌Dong Xian Ge
- 秋夜月Qiu Ye Yue
- 踏青游Ta Qing You
- 华胥引Hua Xu Yin
- 江城梅花引Jiang Cheng Mei Hua Yin
- 劝金船Quan Jin Chuan
- 醉思仙Zui Si Xian
- 惜红衣Xi Hong Yi
- 石湖仙Shi Hu Xian
- 鱼游春水Yu You Chun Shui
- 醉翁操Zui Weng Cao
- 塞翁吟Sai Weng Yin
- 法曲献仙音Fa Qu Xian Xian Yin
- 露华Lu Hua
- 薄媚摘遍Bo Mei Zhai Bian
- 东风齐着力Dong Feng Qi Zhuo Li
- 满江红Man Jiang Hong
- 四犯剪梅花Si Fan Jian Mei Hua
- 凄凉犯Qi Liang Fan
- 高平探芳新Gao Ping Tan Fang Xin
- 六幺令Liu Yao Ling
- 芙蓉月Fu Rong Yue
- 玉漏迟Yu Lou Chi
- 水调歌头Shui Diao Ge Tou
- 满庭芳Man Ting Fang
- 扫地游Sao Di You
- 白雪Bai Xue
- 二色莲Er Se Lian
- 双瑞莲Shuang Rui Lian
- 徵招Zhi Shao
- 凤凰台上忆吹箫Feng Huang Tai Shang Yi Chui Xiao
- 骤雨打新荷Zhou Yu Da Xin He
- 黄莺儿Huang Ying Er
- 熙州慢Xi Zhou Man
- 天香Tian Xiang
- 汉宫春Han Gong Chun
- 剑器近Jian Qi Jin
- 早梅香Zao Mei Xiang
- 八声甘州Ba Sheng Gan Zhou
- 醉蓬莱Zui Peng Lai
- 夜合花Ye He Hua
- 夏初临Xia Chu Lin
- 长亭怨慢Chang Ting Yuan Man
- 暗香An Xiang
- 被花恼Bei Hua Nao
- 松梢月Song Shao Yue
- 梦芙蓉Meng Fu Rong
- 玉京谣Yu Jing Yao
- 绿盖舞风轻Lü Gai Wu Feng Qing
- 采明珠Cai Ming Zhu
- 声声慢Sheng Sheng Man
- 燕春台Yan Chun Tai
- 黄河清慢Huang He Qing Man
- 并蒂芙蓉Bing Di Fu Rong
- 扬州慢Yang Zhou Man
- 双双燕Shuang Shuang Yan
- 舞杨花Wu Yang Hua
- 万年欢Wan Nian Huan
- 陌上花Mo Shang Hua
- 宴山亭Yan Shan Ting
- 三部乐San Bu Yue
- 梦扬州Meng Yang Zhou
- 琐窗寒Suo Chuang Han
- 月下笛Yue Xia Di
- 丁香结Ding Xiang Jie
- 聒龙谣Guo Long Yao
- 十月桃Shi Yue Tao
- 催雪Cui Xue
- 蜀溪春Shu Xi Chun
- 念奴娇Nian Nu Jiao
- 解语花Jie Yu Hua
- 垂杨Chui Yang
- 八音谐Ba Yin Xie
- 大椿Da Chun
- 采绿吟Cai Lü Yin
- 惜寒梅Xi Han Mei
- 高阳台Gao Yang Tai
- 渡江云Du Jiang Yun
- 东风第一枝Dong Feng Di Yi Zhi
- 剪牡丹Jian Mu Dan
- 喜朝天Xi Chao Tian
- 玉烛新Yu Zhu Xin
- 翠楼吟Cui Lou Yin
- 湘月Xiang Yue
- 霓裳中序第一Ni Chang Zhong Xu Di Yi
- 疏帘淡月Shu Lian Dan Yue
- 花发状元红慢Hua Fa Zhuang Yuan Hong Man
- 水龙吟Shui Long Yin
- 台城路Tai Cheng Lu
- 宴清都Yan Qing Dou
- 曲游春Qu You Chun
- 湘春夜月Xiang Chun Ye Yue
- 恋芳春慢Lian Fang Chun Man
- 石州慢Shi Zhou Man
- 瑞鹤仙Rui He Xian
- 雨霖铃Yu Lin Ling
- 还京乐Huan Jing Yue
- 探春慢Tan Chun Man
- 升平乐Sheng Ping Yue
- 眉妩Mei Wu
- 二郎神Er Lang Shen
- 倾杯乐Qing Bei Yue
- 永遇乐Yong Yu Yue
- 惜余欢Xi Yu Huan
- 拜星月慢Bai Xing Yue Man
- 绮罗香Qi Luo Xiang
- 南浦Nan Pu
- 宴琼林Yan Qiong Lin
- 霜花腴Shuang Hua Yu
- 澡兰香Zao Lan Xiang
- 向湖边Xiang Hu Bian
- 送我入门来Song Wo Ru Men Lai
- 绕池游慢Rao Chi You Man
- 曲玉管Qu Yu Guan
- 西河Xi He
- 秋霁Qiu Ji
- 暗香疏影An Xiang Shu Ying
- 清风八咏楼Qing Feng Ba Yong Lou
- 望远行Wang Yuan Xing
- 泛清波摘遍Fan Qing Bo Zhai Bian
- 解连环Jie Lian Huan
- 夜飞鹊Ye Fei Que
- 望海潮Wang Hai Chao
- 角招Jue Shao
- 泛清苕Fan Qing Tiao
- 折红梅Zhe Hong Mei
- 一萼红Yi E Hong
- 无愁可解Wu Chou Ke Jie
- 杜韦娘Du Wei Niang
- 过秦楼Guo Qin Lou
- 风流子Feng Liu Zi
- 疏影Shu Ying
- 高山流水Gao Shan Liu Shui
- 斗婵娟Dou Chan Juan
- 惜余春慢Xi Yu Chun Man
- 期夜月Qi Ye Yue
- 沁园春Qin Yuan Chun
- 紫萸香慢Zi Yu Xiang Man
- 摸鱼儿Mo Yu Er
- 贺新郎He Xin Lang
- 吊严陵Diao Yan Ling
- 金明池Jin Ming Chi
- 画屏秋色Hua Ping Qiu Se
- 白苎Bai Zhu
- 春雪间早梅Chun Xue Jian Zao Mei
- 兰陵王Lan Ling Wang
- 破阵乐Po Zhen Yue
- 大酺Da Pu
- 多丽Duo Li
- 六丑Liu Chou
- 六州歌头Liu Zhou Ge Tou
- 夜半乐Ye Ban Yue
- 穆护砂Mu Hu Sha
- 三台San Tai
- 哨遍Shao Bian
- 莺啼序Ying Ti Xu